Wednesday, April 12, 2023

Part 7 STORY Writing practice

Look at the three pictures. Write the story shown in the pictures. 
Write 35 words or more. You can hand in your work or write your stories in the comments section below. For more stories, click HERE. 
The more you write, the easier it gets and the better you become!
 








2 comments:

Unknown said...

Yesterday Tommy and i were walking in the city centre, when we saw a little pois bag on the floor.
I opened that and i found an identific card, i looked the picture of an old person and i remembered who was that woman: my neighbour!
So we went to her house and i gave back it to Marisa. She was grateful of our action!!

Maya Scaffai 3B

Prof O said...

Good job. Here are some corrections:
- Remember that "I" must always be capitalized.
- "pois" is polka-dots but you can use "spots" (a bag with polka-dots or a bag with spots.)
- They are outside, so they found the bag on the ground /by the street/ on the sidewalk (marciapiede)
- I opened it
- identity card
- I looked at the picture
- ..I remembered that woman was...
- and I gave it back to ...